Time out on Time Out Kuala Lumpur
This is the first time I've laid eyes upon Time Out Kuala Lumpur, not in print but in the web. A diehard fan of Kinokuniya, especially the KL branch, I zoomed straight into this link.
To my amusement I found this little write-up:
'Big, bright bookshop with a huge selection of books with sections dedicated to various topics. The upper level is specifically for art and design along with a cozy cafe in the corner. This famous Japanese bookstore also boast of a large collection of local as well as international maps.'
Can anyone out there tell me what's so grossly edited about this piece? (Hints: grammar, punctuation.)
